Monday, 19 September 2016

this is my writing from cohen holloway 

                                                  hooked on danger




Pua cast his line from the dinghy and it snagged straight away.uncle tried to help him reel it but it wouldn't budge .suddenly the sky turned gray and the sea got choppy and a giant pirate ship bubbled from the depths of the ocean,dwarfing uncles dinghy.

They Bourded the Pirate ship I found a cutlass in a barrel uncle and I searched the Ship clean and found a baby pig and a box of treasure.I desided to keep the pig and name it gooner I promised to look after it.my uncle chucked the treasure on to the dinghy,but it was too heavy uncles dinghy and the treasure sunk to the bottem of the sea.the treasure fell fastly through the water and hit a squid on the head and suddenly a giant squid emerged from out of the sea.I shouted”uncle it’s a giant squid!”We both jumped into the water.I gave my  lifejacket to Gooner  because i knew how to swim.The squid landed on the pirate ship sunk once again down,down,down and down to the depths of the sea.


From the wreckage arose  three pears of goggles and six air tanks “are you thinking?”I said “yeah”said uncle “well  then let's dive”We all dived down to see the shine of gold and diamonds we swam towards the treasure chest  but then out of no where came  the  giant squid i swam towards it and cut off two of his tentacles. The squid  swam away very fast we grabbed the treasure and a boat that could hold the treasure  and Gooner brought the two  tentacles  so we could make calamari for the whole village.

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