Writing

we have been writing about a moment in time.

in order to write a moment in time you need to be first person
you need to have a story to tell
similes and metaphor
desripife writing
here is one of my moments in time.


When I first lay down on my uncle’s biscuit I  started to shiver because I was swimming in the freezing cold. The boat zoomed across the lake and then I flew off the side of the basic.